Oh with the second chapter bit I have two comments. When John and Sherlock leave the morgue and John says “thank you,” I think mentioning who he’s saying it to will be nice (like thanks sherlock for telling me or thanks molly for coming in and telling us about the bodies) and second is I think there should be a little more info between sherlock says john would look too military otherwise and john tripping over the coffee table. Did the statement make him stumble or was it the outfit??? Mystery~